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stronger than steel part 1 by ~doomboy911:icondoomboy911:

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Stronger Than Steel
          Part I


How to do it, how to do it He wondered as he stood on the asteroid pacing back and forth ,the pressures of space not bothering him "Time beats space..." He muttered as he saw the meteor head down to a mostly blue planet except for the immensely large green super continent "No that won't do," he said "Rewind!" He yelled for no one to hear but himself  the meteor winding back as he watched it replay it headed past him  , "...pause." Hmm hmm hmm He wondered. "How to stop the crash while keeping my powers. No matter what it must be possible... hmm... play!" The  meteor started back up again and heads closer and closer to the planet its about to crash any minute. Three seconds before the impact the scene cuts and changes. The meteor is a ball and the planet is a bat. The ball is hit. It goes flying and a kid who up until now wanted to be something, be someone ,saw this as his chance. "This is it I can catch this," The boy said. He jumps for it amazingly high (at least ten feet). He catches it. He lands. The batter is out. The kid just wonders how that happened. How could he jump so high?
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The very beginning of my series. I have done some work with my editor to improve it so it makes some actual freakin' sense

edit alright its not in script form but I just want to enter it and whoever I work with I can shift it to script for
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Mood: Enjoying The Show ~doomboy911:icondoomboy911: Oct 27, 2007, 8:51:08 AM
its going to be sweet :comic:

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Mood: Neutral ~Exhalent:iconExhalent: Apr 30, 2008, 7:32:50 PM
I left out some punctuation. Since you are the author you can fix it.[link]
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~Joeman454:iconJoeman454: Jul 1, 2008, 12:28:47 PM
i like it but. What just happened ??? lol i was just reading first i see a random person on a asteroid then i see a kid on a baseball field im a little confused BUT! i like it ^^;;

OH and editor do u use i would love if u tell me i need something to fix up my grammer ^^;; or if u want u can help me
Dx my teacher was sapose to give me the corrections she did for me but never did >.>
~doomboy911:icondoomboy911: Jul 1, 2008, 1:00:47 PM
his name is exhalent and the guy on the asteroid was a time traveler and my grammar terrible too read the rest it gets more into the story about the kid

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what you do is what you can what I do is what all of you want to do
get the job done and then you can give up
these are quotes by me
I am writing a comic heres the beginning
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=lazymills1986:iconlazymills1986: Oct 22, 2008, 4:47:37 PM
dood this is perty interesting. is this the sotry you are talking about? are u trying to retitle it?

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~doomboy911:icondoomboy911: Oct 23, 2008, 7:02:36 AM
well its the issues name but they need one for all of them just like how the avengers have the title on the top

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what you do is what you can what I do is what all of you want to do
get the job done and then you can give up
heres my comic
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=lazymills1986:iconlazymills1986: Feb 25, 2009, 5:18:24 AM
Fire in my skies.
No Dream.
Anticipation.
Catch.

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i have a cow
~doomboy911:icondoomboy911: Mar 2, 2009, 8:32:03 PM
No dream sounds good and so does catch. I'm liking anticipation but I think it needs a little more.

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